poem, as yet unnamed.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 27-May-2008 16:08:51

I wrote this yesterday. creative and constructive thoughts welcome. Enjoy.
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Wet handprints on a window,
Filtering the light.
Searching for a hero,
Trying to find the right.
Words to say I love you,
To say next time I’ll try.
Saying baby I’m sorry,
I’ll keep your heart this time.
Won’t trample on it,
Or grind it into the dust.
I won’t twist it like metal,
Or stain it with my rust.

Post 2 by Albanac (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 27-May-2008 16:13:45

Howdy, hugs and shtuff,
You've seen my comments already, so I'll just say this. Good on ya for posting it here! Keep it up.
Cheers,
Simon

Post 3 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 27-May-2008 16:16:17

lol, thanks, Si.